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sunlit_skycat ([personal profile] sunlit_skycat) wrote in [community profile] blueheronteanook 2023-06-18 08:14 pm (UTC)

Overall, this chapter has a lot of good banter that really makes them all feel like a group of friends (kind of) in a car. Hadley is fun. I liked how you had Reid explain her Practice, and then had Hadley actually get annoyed at that. Takes that moment from merely explaining things for the benefit of the reader to a small characterization moment for the both of them.

Chase and Tanner using Augury to try to win at rock paper scissors is a nice touch, too.

Let's see how well this peace lasts, because I don't trust it. If this is Reid's first time drinking, then oh boy.

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